and yet our heart formed inside of that passion

[AspiringComposer]

This might be a little more confusing. It is very important that "heart" is not plural but is possessive to two people. "Passion" is referring to an engulfing of feelings.. like a fire. If there is a word for passion that could also be used for fire that would be perfect. "inside of" can be substituted for words like "because" or "under" if necessary. Thank you!

 

[Abbatiſſæ Scriptor]

COR NOSTRVM AVTEM IN ARDORE ILLE FORMATVM

 

[Laurentius]

Would be "illo". And maybe "formed" here is past simple.

 

[AspiringComposer]

I am having a hard time discerning between the "u" and a "v" in the latin phrase you have given me. Could you help me with that? Thank you for your translation!

Laurentius, are you giving a different translation for "formed"? Your response was a bit confusing

 

[Pacifica]

Maybe autem would be better between cor and nostrum. But in fact I think that "but yet" needs something stronger than autem. Like attamen (to be put in first position).

Attamen cor nostrum in ardore illo formatum est.

 

[Laurentius]

Laurentius, are you giving a different translation for "formed"? Your response was a bit confusing

Ah nothing, I think he just elided est.

 

[Abbatiſſæ Scriptor]

Yes, there was an imply'd 'eſt'.
The Engliſh was active in form, but ſeem'd to me to have an eſſentially reflexive or middle voice ſenſe, ſo I meant 'formatum' as a perfect participle. Then again, having miſtaken the gender of 'ardor', I ſhould probably juſt go hide.

 

[Pacifica]

Then again, having miſtaken the gender of 'ardor', I ſhould probably juſt go hide.

You didn't mistake its gender, it's masculine, but you failed to make ille agree with ardore in the ablative.

 

[Laurentius]

Yes, there was an imply'd 'eſt'.
The Engliſh was active in form, but ſeem'd to me to have an eſſentially reflexive or middle voice ſenſe, ſo I meant 'formatum' as a perfect participle. Then again, having miſtaken the gender of 'ardor', I ſhould probably juſt go hide.

Happens!