‘Till death forever undaunted

[jalvis81]

I saw a translation online that was

Usque ad mortem in aeternum, indomitus

However, i figured it would probably be innacurate and wanted to run it by this board.

Thanks guys!!

 

[R. Seltza]

Could we get some more context?
Do you mean this as in "Until Death, I/You/He/She/They/It/etc. Will Be/Remain Undaunted" or did you have something else in mind?

 

[jalvis81]

Certainly.

Until death, I will remain undaunted.


Until death, I will be undaunted.

 

[R. Seltza]

Okay. My 1st thought would be Usque Ad Mortem, Interritus Manebo (Until Death, I Will Remain Unafraid).​

I suppose a reworded, active version of this would be Interritus Usque Ad Mortem Manebo ("I Will Remain Unafraid Until Death").​

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There may be a better way of saying this, so I'd wait for some more responses.​

 

[Dantius]

Usque ad mortem in aeternum, indomitus

The translation you have is grammatically correct though I'd remove the comma. However, indomitus means "untamed" or "ungoverned", so I think R. Seltza's interritus is a better word choice. His translations are correct as well.

active

Both sentences are active. They just put the prepositional phrase in a different place.

 

[Pacifica]

The translation you have is grammatically correct though I'd remove the comma. However, indomitus means "untamed" or "ungoverned", so I think R. Seltza's interritus is a better word choice.

To avoid two prepositional phrases in a row, I might be tempted to replace in aeternum to an adverb like sempiterno or perpetuo, though I guess it isn't really wrong to keep the prepositional phrase.

His translations are correct as well.

Correct but a bit overcapitalized, in my opinion.