Hey all, I am back after a short hiatus. I was in Ft. Lauderdale, FL for some technical training (I work for Lexus as an automotive technician) Anyways, I have started up again on my story, and I am trying to write the outline for the chapter that will detail the assualt on the castle. I was wondering to see what the general concensus was on the final translation. I know that there was an issue with not being able to use the term 'a bolt of' when it came to the lightning. Would it be easier to use something like..
Forces of lightning, I command thee!
I am not trying to be a pain, just curious is all! Thanks for all the great help so far, you guys(and gals) are awesome!