This is a writing of mine I'd really like transcribed into Latin, its very meaningful to me and will be carved and painted onto various mediums as I am inspired to, so any and all help with it is deeply appreciated.
I'd like the translation to be as close as possible, but am absolutely open to artistic play on the words to make them more beautiful in Latin and/or made to better reflect the nature and sentiment of the writing.
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With her death, a sun had risen.
In my solitary reign, I long for its warmth.
The setting sun seducing me unto the fleeing horizon’s calm.
Cold, I curl up to the pleasant dream of death; natures warm quilt.
The cross she bore, now my crown of thorns.
When my bones are given to damp earth, I will meet her at dawn, when that sun rises again.
I'd like the translation to be as close as possible, but am absolutely open to artistic play on the words to make them more beautiful in Latin and/or made to better reflect the nature and sentiment of the writing.
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With her death, a sun had risen.
In my solitary reign, I long for its warmth.
The setting sun seducing me unto the fleeing horizon’s calm.
Cold, I curl up to the pleasant dream of death; natures warm quilt.
The cross she bore, now my crown of thorns.
When my bones are given to damp earth, I will meet her at dawn, when that sun rises again.