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I have written two latin poems of sorts and wanted more experienced latin speakers opinions and feedback::
"Dum Vivimus, Vivamus"
dum spirimus, speramus
dum somnimus, amemus
dum vivimus, vivamus
whilst we breathe, let us hope
whilst we dream, let us love
whilst we live, let us live
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"Deficere Non Eligendum Est"
homo sum
Atque errare humanum est
Cuiusvis hominis est errare
nullius nisi insipientis in errore perseverare
Omne initium est difficile
Luctor et emergo
flectandum, non frangar
Atque nemini Cedimus
Quia
Deficere Non Eligendum Est
I am a man
and it is human to err
Any man can make a mistake
only a fool keeps making the same one
Every beginning is difficult
I struggle but I'll survive
I may bend but i will not break
and I yield to no one
because
failure is not an option
Thanks
"Dum Vivimus, Vivamus"
dum spirimus, speramus
dum somnimus, amemus
dum vivimus, vivamus
whilst we breathe, let us hope
whilst we dream, let us love
whilst we live, let us live
----------------------------
"Deficere Non Eligendum Est"
homo sum
Atque errare humanum est
Cuiusvis hominis est errare
nullius nisi insipientis in errore perseverare
Omne initium est difficile
Luctor et emergo
flectandum, non frangar
Atque nemini Cedimus
Quia
Deficere Non Eligendum Est
I am a man
and it is human to err
Any man can make a mistake
only a fool keeps making the same one
Every beginning is difficult
I struggle but I'll survive
I may bend but i will not break
and I yield to no one
because
failure is not an option
Thanks