Omnia mortem praesentem nautis ostendunt

[ClassicalSoul]

Is this translation correct?

Subito nubes atrae caelum occultant atque crebra fulgura cum tonitru in tenebris micant. Omnia mortem praesentem nautis ostendunt.

...All these things showed death presiding over the sailors.

 

[Pacifica]

- There is no "these".

- Praesentem = "present", or in the context perhaps rather "imminent".