Ianua egressus Clodius ventre suo magno offendit adulescentem parieti similem tantus erat. Clodius cecidit, adulescens magnus non constitit sed perrexit.
Clodius exclamavit: “Abi in malem rem, sceleste!”
Tum adulescentem intuitus est. Capillo nigro erat et tunicam flavam gerebat!
Clodius surrexit, sed, cum multum vini bibisset, vix surgere poterat.
Having gone out the door, Clodius bumped with his big belly into a young man similar to a wall, he was so big. Clodius fell. The large young man did not stop but continued on.
Clodius shouted: “Go to hell, crook!”
Then he looked at the young man. He had black hair and was wearing a yellow tunic.
Clodius got up, but since he had drank much wine he was barely able to stand up.
The first sentence doesn’t seem right at all.
Please read and advise.
Edits in bold.
Clodius exclamavit: “Abi in malem rem, sceleste!”
Tum adulescentem intuitus est. Capillo nigro erat et tunicam flavam gerebat!
Clodius surrexit, sed, cum multum vini bibisset, vix surgere poterat.
Having gone out the door, Clodius bumped with his big belly into a young man similar to a wall, he was so big. Clodius fell. The large young man did not stop but continued on.
Clodius shouted: “Go to hell, crook!”
Then he looked at the young man. He had black hair and was wearing a yellow tunic.
Clodius got up, but since he had drank much wine he was barely able to stand up.
The first sentence doesn’t seem right at all.
Please read and advise.
Edits in bold.
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