I've had a couple of years of latin, but it has been a couple more years since I last studied the language. I am trying to translate the phrase "Your Strength is My Power, Forever." An adaptation of the chorus to the song for our first dance.
What I have right now (after digging out the old text book) is: Fortitudines Vestra Meus Potentatus, Semper.
A couple of specifics: while looking at some other threads I noticed someone recommended the "est" be excluded from a similar phrase. I like this idea because I think this leaves me with a solid chiasmus, but correct me if I'm wrong. I am also writing this phrase in reference to my wife and daughter, hence my use of the plural in the beginning.
Basically I'm aiming for an intelligible translation that my magistra would see and not want to go retroactively change my grades in her class.
Thanks in advance!
What I have right now (after digging out the old text book) is: Fortitudines Vestra Meus Potentatus, Semper.
A couple of specifics: while looking at some other threads I noticed someone recommended the "est" be excluded from a similar phrase. I like this idea because I think this leaves me with a solid chiasmus, but correct me if I'm wrong. I am also writing this phrase in reference to my wife and daughter, hence my use of the plural in the beginning.
Basically I'm aiming for an intelligible translation that my magistra would see and not want to go retroactively change my grades in her class.
Thanks in advance!